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Disappearing Girl by ~BE-Beautiful:iconBE-Beautiful:



I am the disappearing girl
And this is my only show!
So prepare to be amazed,
By how easily I fade away.
Hurry quick,
This is a one time display!
And by golly you must obey,
For its magnificent, so they say,
Truly worth the amount you pay!

So without delay
           Without delay,

I will vanish before your eyes!
And I promise this,
It is no lie.
For I am an absence of a me.
And so now,
Without further decree,
I vanish! Gone!
As you see.
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*poof*

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:iconunderworldriver:
I love the word play and the metered rhyme and structure. =) Over all, a well-written piece.

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~Save me from my fears, save my butterflies and love me forever, my beloved Styx~
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I am a proud member of ~lyriclub B-)
:icontrelore:
Beautifully done and if you really were to disappear and poof begone, The world would have no more songs and the world would become a colder place to be, you see

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:iconbe-beautiful:
ha thanks :D but I am sure it would be fine lol

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You can't cross the sea merely by standing and staring at the water.
:icontrelore:
nah, because look how bad it is now with you gone I am sure it would be far worse.

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Also if you like good stories, poems and love Cats. Then come to the club, my friends and I created>[link]

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